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IrishCoyote
A BIT ELVISH
(apologies to Terry Pratchett)

This was music
Music that had not only escaped
But had robbed the bank on the way out

Music with its sleeves rolled up
And its top two buttons undone
Raising its hat and stealing the silver

Music that went down to your feet
By way of the pelvis
Without paying a call on Mr. Brain

Made your boots
Change by themselves
So you knew there was majick afoot

Music that was occult
And deep fried
Be there or be square
Is always a mystic code

Speaking
In the language
Of the Beat

The was music with rocks in

Morphic Resonance
Soul Harmonics
Soul Music

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MARTIAN KISS

I want to kiss you like
I'm not going anywhere
Like there is nothing else to think about
Like this moment will never change

And there is nothing more important to do

Because, is there?
paintedturtlegirl
Wow - very, very nice!
DustyVolume
Wow, those first two stanzas are AWESOME!

I'd like to see the rest of this expressed with as much power and super-strength as these are.

Plus I really like

"Speaking
in the language
of the beat"

Awesome Job, DM!
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