I can't make you happy
I can only make you mad
and every time, I've let myself down again
I hate the building of these walls
around the person that I love
can't I be the helping hand that tears them down?
but now the bricks multiply
and the quiet climbs sky high
so I sit alone in the silence
of me, myself and I.

rule number one: Never apologize for your art. Never.

That was very nice, btw...

thanks

I liked everything about it... except the title.

i like it.

I especially like the part:

but now the bricks multiply
and the quiet climbs sky high


yeah, keep posting your stuff ~

In the Creative Writing class I'm in there is only one rule: "no self-depreciation". Our teacher had to learn that herself at a poetry workshop 'cause she used to do the same thing (and she's a great teacher, too!)

thanks everyone I didn't expect all this lol

Day Two

Today I walked in circles
Looking towards the tower
Feeding on the vines that scale cold stones
It was windy out this morning
And I should have been ready to fall

Very good, Rachel.

I think we're lucky to have you here.

aww, thanks.

word kylie.


really good boo, is this the song you're working on?

si..

wow, i really like this. both parts!